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Remembering What Was and Is by ~Forgottenfeline:iconForgottenfeline:



Carve my name into your hands,
With the knife that has the bloodstains from your heart.
Light another cigarette just to see,
If you can get the taste of my lips out of your mind.
Stain your skin, just stain it with,
The memories of you and me.
Drink another bottle of Vodka,
'Cause you want something other than me to drown our mind.
Cover your feet in handwritten tattoos,
Just to see if you can get out that numb feeling,
We both know got there from my touch.
Paint your face, won't you paint your face,
To cover my lipstick marks.
Drench yourself, I know you will,
With my perfume to remember how it smelled.
Will you cut your hair or dye it this time,
So you won't recognize those pictures on the wall.
Tear apart that two bedroom apartment,
Rearrange so you can't remember my being there at all.
But dare I ask,
Can you ever really rid yourself of my memory?
©2007-2009 ~Forgottenfeline
:iconforgottenfeline:

Author's Comments

Just wrote it in class...

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:icononewithdarkness:
love the detail, it paints a very vivid picture.
great job, just watch out on the flow.

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:iconmarijoe:
hi ...
i really like ur poem...
ur very talented.
i had to look 4 some words in dictionary but, i understand it.
sorry for my english.
but i understand better than i writte.
jeje

xoxo
marijo

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¿Cual es el curso eterno?
Donde juego que me voy
Con la inercia de mis sueños
Donde corro sin razón.

InerCia.
TéleSis.
:iconmdiaz:
thats awesome
so good
:iconthoran-storyteller:
Impressive, a very vivid poem, touching on lots of emotions to great effect.
Well Done

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'A picture paints a thousand words. My words paint a thousand pictures.'- A Wise Fool
:iconskeelar:
*ghasps* wow. I normally don't go for poety, but this is just amazing. I think everyone can identify it, or at least I know I can, and this just totally captures that feeling. ^_^
:iconforgottenfeline:
Thank you! And coming from a not-so-poetry-oriented person, that means a lot. Wonderful to know it is loved, and thank you again for your comment. It's all about the whole 'Breaking up and missing that girl who isn't missing you' type thing, you know?

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Will you catch me when I fall?
*100ThemesChallenge
:iconskeelar:
oh, totally. that's such a rare feeling, it seems like, and it's definitely a good one to immortalize in poetry :D

and no problem about the comment ^_^ really, it's great. I like how it's a little more informal and personal than most poetry.
:iconthe2ndcoming:
powerful and emotional:). I like
:iconshaytall:
oohh Nice :D
you're really talented

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